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10. Crashing through the thick pines,[[strikethrough]] pine branches pushing against [[/strikethrough]] the lens always pushing [[strikethrough]] always [[/strikethrough]] against pine branches, [[strikethrough]] my body (not seen) for [[foreground p?]] [[/strikethrough]] causing constantly changing patterns [[strikethrough]] of pine needles [[/strikethrough]] and sense of tactility.    

My unseen body [[strikethrough]] walk [[/strikethrough]] knocking 
into pine trees, my feet crunching 
crackly pine branches. 
Sound Track: The sounds of the pine trees themselves as 
my unseen body knocks into them and my 
feet crunch the crackly pine [[strikethrough]] branches [[/strikethrough]] needles.
 and branches.

11. [[strikethrough]] The camera [[/strikethrough]] Opens with pine branches reflected upside 
down in water, camera is zoomed up. A stone falls 
into the water, and as the circular or ripples begin 
to radiate out, the camera zooms back all the way revealing 
a [[strikethrough]] open [[/strikethrough]] circle [[strikethrough]] of [[illegible]] [[/strikethrough which fills the whole frame [[strikethrough]] where the camera 
is zoomed out the rest of the frame being blacked out [[/strikethrough]] the rest being blacked out.  


[[strikethrough]] Through the circle [[/strikethrough]] The camera begins to move. [[strikethrough]] along the banks of the bog [[/strikethrough]] Visible within the circle [[strikethrough]] are [[/strikethrough]] is the still [[strikethrough]] water [[/strikethrough]] bog 
water [[strikethrough]] and [[/strikethrough]] reflecting from time to time a few 
inverted pine trees. The banks of the bog [[strikethrough]] are 
the intersect [[/strikethrough]] bisect the top and bottom of the 
circle. By cutting down the field of vision - 
there is an increase of awareness of the relative 
motion of the near and the far bank, the 
close one going swiftly by, the far one 
moving slowly, [[strikethrough]] Tufts of [[/strikethrough]] Towards the [[?]] 
tufts of bog grass [strike]pass[/strike]in the water pass by at their own pace.

Sound Track: The sound of a slowly approaching airplane.